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Jan. 1st, 2012 06:14 am (UTC)
There was an episode of House M.D. in which the patient is a phychopath, but it turns out that she was not always a phychopath. the phychopathy was just a symptom, and when the doctors start treating her, she starts feeling remorse for all the cruel, terrible things she did to the people around her.

Can I have a story in which ATG goes through this? he gets "cured" and he starts realizing how much of a monster he is. But I don't want just automatically switching to good and becoming nice. I want him to go through something really angsty.
Jan. 26th, 2012 10:13 pm (UTC)
Cured part 1/2
They said he was "cured". That he would get "better".

ATG laughed at them. Nothing anyone could do would ever "fix" him. He was cruel, sadistic, and unfeeling. He was a murderer lacking any human decency, and he loved it.

So he found it a little odd when he stood over the dead hooker's body and felt nothing. Feeling he ought to try again, he brought another hooker home and killed her too. He concentrated on her screams and tried to focus on the enjoyment he normally felt.

It was still there.

He smiled. The first girl had been boring, that was all. He was fine.
But as more time went on, he grew numb to the blood. Killing one, two, three, even four hookers failed to spark the glee it once did.

He refused to be concerned though. Killing whores was old anyway, he just needed to find something more interesting to play with. Yet he put off finding people to torture. It didn't seem to be a priority for some reason.

ATG became irritated at his strange behavior change. In a fit of something that felt too close to desperation, he went out one late night and grabbed the first random stranger who caught his eye. The unfortunate victim was taken back to the basement where ATG performed every disturbing act of violation he could think of.

He felt nothing except a queasy, sick sort of feeling.

After he was done, he looked into the body's lifeless eyes.....and the sight made him want to vomit.

He clutched his head in his hands, waiting for the nausea to pass, wondering what was wrong with him.

They said he was cured. That he would get better.

Then came the day he had the first nightmare. The mere fact he felt fear at all was just as terrifying as the haunting voices that echoed in his dreams.

A horrible feeling settled in his gut and wouldn't go away. It burned him from the inside out. It hurt him in a way it shouldn't, and nothing could numb it even the tiniest bit. It was if the pain wasn't physical, like was something deeper.

At some point he realized what was eating away at him.


It drove him tears of frustration. He didn't understand. Those things had been fun. He had laughed while doing them. But now the memories tormented him. There was an ocean of things to be sorry for, countless despicable acts. ATG couldn't fight it, regret crashed against him in violent waves, and he was helpless against it.
Jan. 26th, 2012 10:14 pm (UTC)
Re: Cured part 2/2
Eventually, the Critic stormed into the basement. Rageful and waving his gun, and demanding to know why the videos had long stopped coming.

But ATG could see behind Critic's mindless shouting.

Critic was always angry around ATG because anger help to drown out the fear of him. But ATG could still see it in the way Critic kept his distance, the way his eyes kept darting around, the way he held his gun more defensively than aggressively.

ATG knew he deserved every bit of suspiration. He knew what he was. Even so, he hated the way Critic looked at him. He made a grab for Critic's gun, knocking it out of Critic's hand with relative ease.

Critic made a sound in his throat. A snarl, a whimper, a choke, something. ATG paid it no mind. His hands grabbed the Critic's tie and pulled him closer.

ATG didn't really know what he was doing. He knew that no amount of blood, tears, pain, or screams could make him feel better anymore. In fact, it would only make him feel worse faster. Critic's eyes were wide with terror, and something in ATG simply snapped.

He started crying, and then he was sobbing into Critic's shirt. He felt sick. He felt ashamed. He felt confused because how could any of this be happening to him. He gripped Critic's jacket tightly, not letting the struggling man the chance to get away. ATG didn't know why, but he needing Critic to stay with him. He needed someone to be with him who was living and breathing, and not screaming or bleeding.

He felt sick again. he shouldn't be doing this. He was evil. He didn't feel guilt or remorse. He certainly didn't need anyone. But the pain was driving him crazy and it was all too much. He was pathetic, had always been pathetic. He couldn't even stand to look at his pipe anymore because of the things he had done to people with it. All the monstrous deeds he committed were killing him inside.

But Critic's arms were around him now. Critic was holding him even though his hands were shaking, and ATG could feel Critic's heart pounding with fear. His cheeks burned with embarrassment and shame. Critic was understandably confused and afraid, yet he still attempted to give some form of comfort. ATG knew he didn't deserve comfort.

"I'm sorry." ATG whispered and kept whispering.

To the people he killed, to the people he left traumatized, to Critic and the Narrator and everyone else.

He had been cured. He had gotten better. And it hurt worse than anything he had ever felt before.

"I'm sorry." he said over and over. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
Jan. 27th, 2012 04:27 am (UTC)
OP here
Oh God... this was absolutly marvelous. Thank you so much Anon.

I love how you described ATG's guilt slowly catching on him. Really angsty, sad, and yet hopeful at the end when Critic lowers his guard, stays and conforts him, despite being so afraid of ATG.

Perfect. Perfect. Perfect. Thank you!
Feb. 14th, 2012 04:15 pm (UTC)
Re: Cured part 2/2
Great work! I really like ATG there :3
May I ask you for permission to translate this fanfic to russian? (yeah, russian tgwtg fandome exists) Please, contact me so I can write your nickname in description.


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